A couple of days ago I read " Till love us part." It's a fic as AU, which is an original, actually. If you change the names, edit it, print it and sell it passes casting.
The story opens with Bella in a choice of the size of Russia or not to marry his best friend, which is very much in love, but do not want to lose (actually, now that I think should start to feel pain from the prologue, because this fear of screwing up that we all have in our relationships, we can not take the risk and opportunities to enjoy life to its fullest), and is no longer the bad guy in his teens. Yshe always had a weakness for bad boys. All were careless and unconscious when young, and Bella was one end of it: it was all a bad girl. Edward, too, and they met, connected, became friends with rights, and then best friends with rights. Their stability is based on both are determined not to never fall in love, hence the name of the fic. They spent a prank after another, and while everyone wondered why not formalized, they kept saying that was not what made up their relationship. When school ended, he went to Italy to study music, and she to college to study something unknownida. None of the character was easy, but they managed to talk by phone every so often, and keep in touch. After his time in Europe, Edward and Bella plan to share apartment in the university, but cohabitation is difficult, and decide to live every man for himself. Has gone a little further in history, but not both, and I have enough perspective to make a good summary of what follows, so let's work with fingerprints.
This story is told in parallel the present and the past. Every moment that we are in some way, the two of them as critical for the development of their relationshipand the moment in which they are (both have admitted that they love, he wants to marry her, she did not know what to say. He wants to marry him, but do not want to lose, big problem). Of course, they are soul mates. Known and accepted as they are. Have seen the worst of the other and just love each other, and we all know that this is the definition of friendship. In general, we have the illusion that things are instant, you look at people and where you can qualify for the relationship, if that person is friend or partner only known. I have seen lots of times it is necessary to know, spending time with no pressure to meet family expectations, grow and mature togetheranother to build the foundations of a solid relationship. Sounds stupid, but reading this fiction gives me hope. I see my own fear of change. My own resistance to change, to be an adult. And I believe in happy endings and fairy, and that I have faith that Bella is going to budge, and after shouting a little more, will live happily ever after. See each chapter in perspective, when they decide to say why they acted so in every situation, gives a powerful feeling. Since the prologue is more advanced than Chapter 1, we know that both have matured, even now Edward is a chico renovated, and have admitted that many things that made young people was because deep down they liked, and everything revolves around that.
is well written, there are slight misspellings, and other Fallitas I know they are guilty of ff.net, because it erases letters, words and stuff together. But believe me, what matters is that the story is entertaining, the writing is good, and there is good management of the chapter and the concept of narrative time.
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